Today in class we formed groups to go over are essay's we have written. My essay was short but got straight to the point of what i wanted to get across. I will have to make some corrections on it because the reason for the groups was to tell and help each other on what we should add or take away. The essay as I said before was supposed to be to a teacher requesting a grade change and mine was exactly about that. I just feel I have to make it a little longer so the read can get my point and really understand where I'm coming from. The group set up was a good way to learn because each person writes differently we also had to read ours out loud to others. In doing so they gave us feedback, sort of like ideas of what to look at for revising it. Each of ours were all different some longer than others and some shorter. Our teacher also listened in to help us and to give us some advice it was helpful. Each day I come to class I learn a lot more, not only about myself but others as well. This to me is always a good thing and always very beneficially because you can learn how to use others ways of writing and make it your own, and build it with your way of writing to make a great new set up to your writing process. So basically in class today we talked about how to correctly write a proper essay on email etiquettes in English 0301 the exercise that we went through today showed me how to write it out and know what to examine when I am write another paper dealing with this topic. So what I got to say about this is we should do this more often therefore the class can all follow up more easily.
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